Not sure why, but I feel compelled to criticize the writing of
some professional newspaper reporters and writers. This Washington Post article with a tri-person byline concerned Trump’s transition and
selection of Whitehouse aids. It included the following sentence. They said:
“As the seriousness of governing subsumes the
vitriol of the campaign, a dozen national security experts interviewed said
they believed experienced people will resume their roles as apolitical
professionals and be willing to join the administration.”
Did
whichever writer who penned this sentence actually believe that most of their
readers or even ANY of their readers actually talk like this? “The seriousness
of the campaign
subsumes the vitriol of the campaign . . .”
REALLY?
Rather than trying to impress their colleagues, they should
work harder on using plain language that clearly makes their point.
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